Thursday, January 21, 2010


She hesitated for a moment at the door. Once she walked through that doorway things would be forever changed. Her memories would be altered, her future uncertain.

Eighteen was supposed to be a carefree age full of feelings of being invincible. Invincible becomes erased when your boyfriend of three whole years – a lifetime in high school – nearly dies in a car accident of his own making.

She was torn. She wanted to turn away and live the carefree life that she lived before but he beckoned; he she had known for more than half her life.

She pushed it open.

Wooo! Go me! Finally wrote a response to Slouchy's 100 word story challenge.

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mayberry said...

Nice! You did a great job with that.

slouchy said...

good work, heather!

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